ShopDreamUp AI ArtDreamUp
Deviation Actions
Literature Text
Sitting on the edge of the ocean
Looking into the depths of the blue
Seeing my sorrow reflected back at me
Wishing that you would get a clue
I know I’m just a bit too subtle
And that I use metaphors too much
I know it’s not right for me to love you
But I can’t help the pain that comes from your touch.
I know sappy poems won’t save me
Seemingly hollow words with form
And I don’t care what you think of me now
As long as you understand where I’m coming from
I need you to tell me what you think – no lies
I can’t understand and take hints
Stop confusing me with what you say each day
I’ve done it, now it’s your turn to admit
Even if you don’t feel that way
As long as I get a straight answer I’ll be fine
I won’t be able to change the way I feel
So you may have to deal with not seeing me for a while
Just understand all that I’m telling you
I don’t think I’d be able to repeat it again
And understand my reasons for staying away
Please, I don’t want to hurt a friend.
Looking into the depths of the blue
Seeing my sorrow reflected back at me
Wishing that you would get a clue
I know I’m just a bit too subtle
And that I use metaphors too much
I know it’s not right for me to love you
But I can’t help the pain that comes from your touch.
I know sappy poems won’t save me
Seemingly hollow words with form
And I don’t care what you think of me now
As long as you understand where I’m coming from
I need you to tell me what you think – no lies
I can’t understand and take hints
Stop confusing me with what you say each day
I’ve done it, now it’s your turn to admit
Even if you don’t feel that way
As long as I get a straight answer I’ll be fine
I won’t be able to change the way I feel
So you may have to deal with not seeing me for a while
Just understand all that I’m telling you
I don’t think I’d be able to repeat it again
And understand my reasons for staying away
Please, I don’t want to hurt a friend.
I actually think this belongs in a section that's part human nature, part romance.
After reading this, if you have any ideas on what to call it, please tell me.
This is one of the very few poems I will write based on my own experiances, just because I suck. Only a few people will know what this is talking about in my life, but for the others, you get the basic idea. This is the second poem I've written based on this experiance and how it's played out, but I can't help dwelling over it all the time.
Anyway, tell me what you think. ^^
After reading this, if you have any ideas on what to call it, please tell me.
This is one of the very few poems I will write based on my own experiances, just because I suck. Only a few people will know what this is talking about in my life, but for the others, you get the basic idea. This is the second poem I've written based on this experiance and how it's played out, but I can't help dwelling over it all the time.
Anyway, tell me what you think. ^^
© 2006 - 2024 Sinnersandsaints08
Comments43
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
now that I really think about it I'm a fool. I just keep triping over myself and ignoring things that I shouldn't and hoping that with the more time that passes that it'll make more sence. It won't. I don't even know myself. I'm sorry, for being an idiot. I don't know what I want or how I feel about anything and... yeah... I'll go and well crall under a rock for a while.